Confusion
It started out, just like any normal day. Got out of bed same time, same breakfast, ect. But today at school I saw one of the staff knock on the door. I was in the middle of a workshop when she said; "Can Dune be excused from class?"
I walked out of the class clueless. When I arrived at the office, and for some reason I saw my parents."Why are you here?I swear I heard you say you had work. Both of you. You even said you'd pick me up late!" Dad replied to me saying; "Well some plans changed a bit."
They thanked Margot before we started walking to the car. I noticed Perle sitting in the car and that the luggedes were in the boot .I went into the car confused ...
The end
I let my friends see and tons of them were sitting there wondering "Whats gonna come next?" Next week I might share to you part two.
Hi Dune,
ReplyDeleteIt's me Keylaine.I personally like that you have good punctuation and grammar.I like your punctuation the most in this sentence:"Can Dune be excused from the class?"
Can you please make another one?